Saturday, September 6, 2008

Egg Monsters From Mars

The lab came into view on the next corner. It was a white shingled building. Very low. Only one story tall. But very long. With a row of small, square windows along the front. It looked like a very long train car.

I remember I like to go to school with my friends. One time, we decided to go to school at night time. The building looked normal only one floor tall but is very long too. But, after sun set it looked so old, the glass is so long that can almost cover the whole building. It made us feel scared. We brought a flesh light and walk in the school. It was silence expect the sound that bats were making on the tree. Fortunately, we did not see anything that we were expect not to see.

So far, in the book Dana was going to the science lab and shows the egg to the scientist. She thought the entire scientist would know what the creature is. On the way the egg creature also tried to escape from the shoes box. I think something bad is going to happen to Dana because she is alone and no one can make sure what will the scientist do to the egg.

1 comment:

Tomohiro said...

It was easy to read because your summary of the text is 2-3 sentences. Also I like your story. When I read bout your story about the school, it remainds me of similar thing. I also went to school at night to get textbook. It was really scared. I never want to go there again at the night time.