Please leave, I begged silently. Please don’t catch us here. When I see this sentence it reminds me that in a movie which is called “Jurassic Park” there are so many carnivores dinosaurs and they tried to eat all the people. I remember there are two children who hided in a kitchen and they wish the dinosaurs to leave, but they open the door and get into the kitchen. I feel so nervous when I see this scene. It helps me to think an image easily which make people scared and nervous.
In the story, so far Alex and Zackie went to a store and there came a woman with a flesh light and she wanted to know who was in the store. Alex and Zakie kept in silence because they were afraid they will be caught.
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Did you use any reading strategy? I have seen Jurasit Park too, but that sentence didn't really remind me of anything.
If i'm in that situation, my heart would pump so fast, and feel so scared of those people who's going to catch me.
I think your summary is better than before. I wonder why "Please leave, I begged silently. Please don’t catch us here." reminded you of Jurassic Park....
This comment is genuine and on-the-mark. You have not only found something to respond to but it relates to your own life directly. Sometimes you don't have to stretch to find something to write about. What you read also does NOT have to relate to your own life. It's okay to say, I have never experienced such a thing. On last thing: try and respond to your readers' comments. It will make you a better reader and writer.
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